2. Your friend invited you to go with him/her to a concert next week, however, you are unable to come. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter
• let your friend know why you can't go to the concert;
• suggest another activity you can do together;
• explain why you think your friend would enjoy this activity.
Dear Sam,
Hope this letter finds you in the best state of health. I am ecstatic to receive the invite of the concert from you. I would first like to share my heartfelt gratitude for this invitation. However, i regret to inform you that i will not be able to make it to the event as i have work commitment on the same day and it is purely coincidental.
I have a final presentation with the management at my workplace for a long term project that is approaching to a conclusion now. The project presentation is of utmost importance, me and my team have been preparing for this task for about a month. Hence it is inevitable for me to conduct.
Nonetheless, to compensate the absence, i suggest planning for a day trip at the nearby botanical garden. It will be a full day activity in the serene atmosphere. I know how much you appreciate outdoor activities and that is why i have well-thought of this trip.
We will enjoy different plants and flowers viewing followed by a BBQ party in the evening. We will also be doing a long due catch-up in the serene environment. I am already excited about the trip.
Once again, i apologies for not showing up on the concert and i hope you understand my situation. I look forward to your confirmation on the suggested alternative plan.
Your Truly,
Aamy
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| 2024-01-02 | Amna Zeeshan | 78 | view |
| 2024-01-01 | Amna Zeeshan | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, Hope this letter finds you in the best s...
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Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...gratitude for this invitation. However, i regret to inform you that i will not be...
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Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...n. However, i regret to inform you that i will not be able to make it to the even...
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Line 4, column 248, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...paring for this task for about a month. Hence it is inevitable for me to conduct. N...
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Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...Nonetheless, to compensate the absence, i suggest planning for a day trip at the ...
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Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s for not showing up on the concert and i hope you understand my situation. I loo...
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Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uggested alternative plan. Your Truly, Aamy
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, look, nonetheless, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55319148936 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87662721876 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570212765957 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4614254457 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.875 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6875 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175443256572 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605651207011 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644078028006 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914314756865 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711060927895 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.