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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 750, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... success in all areas of heart desires. we don’t demand human sacrifice, the use o...
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Line 1, column 882, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Membership
...condition for you to become our member. membership into our fraternity is free and normall...
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Line 1, column 964, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... normally through a thorough screening. we are here to liberate those who need wea...
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Line 1, column 1472, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Politicians
...usiness man, business woman or an artist,Politicians, student and you want to become big, Po...
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Line 1, column 1905, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'full access'.
Suggestion: full access
...ong wealth and famous in life, you have a full access to eradicate poverty away from your lif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, if, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 5.05154639175 436% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 26.3917525773 171% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 937.175257732 178% => OK
No of words: 326.0 206.0 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11349693252 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50816879436 2.54303337028 138% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 127.690721649 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552147239264 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 290.88556701 170% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 16.3608247423 220% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 154.51964596 44.8134815571 345% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.222222222 76.5299724578 242% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 36.2222222222 16.8248392259 215% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138329941103 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453790232221 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440245491913 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138329941103 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 8.37731958763 247% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 70.7449484536 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 7.45979381443 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 8.54432989691 192% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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