Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my disappointment in the services of your bank.
As a responsible customer, on Monday, the third of June, 2019, I place an order for a new checkbook with hundred leaves. I used the net banking facility that your bank offers to avail the check book. However, it has been more than a fort night since I placed the order and I am yet to receive it. A checkbook is an crucial tool to carry out any transactions, in a banking system.
Customer satisfaction has been the unique selling point for your branch and I am quite unhappy that my request was unheeded for such a long time. I even registered a complain with your customer service centre, reference number A00005463.
I would like to know when I can expect the cheque book, so that I can plan my transaction with the limited cheque leaves that I have accordingly. I would also appreciate if you respond to me with the details of the actions that you would take on this issue to ensure that does not cause such inconveniences in the future.
Looking forward to your response and the process that expedites the dispatch of cheque book at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Rajie
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'June 2019'.
Suggestion: June 2019
...sible customer, on Monday, the third of June, 2019, I place an order for a new checkbook w...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...place an order for a new checkbook with hundred leaves. I used the net banking facility...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... I am yet to receive it. A checkbook is an crucial tool to carry out any transacti...
^^
Line 6, column 165, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...for such a long time. I even registered a complain with your customer service centre, refe...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 147, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... cheque leaves that I have accordingly. I would also appreciate if you respond to...
^
Line 10, column 41, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Looking forward to your response and the process that expedites the dispatch of c...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, if, look, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63981042654 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68283285866 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630331753555 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8238233073 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217262490728 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693217484791 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400970392173 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101840551733 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483960918548 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.