It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school going to university. What are the advantage and disadvantages of this?
Now a days, it has become a popular practice that younger generation prefer to take a break after completing high school before joining the universities or their related field studies. The idea may sounds good to some extent but the rare side of the picture also containing some drawbacks.
Above of all, the main advantage of taking a break can boost up the student to re-energize himself for higher studies, a student can refresh himself after having a hectic daily routine of studies, especially those who had a target of desired marks to achieve a specific goal. On the other hand, it could be counted as a bad impact upon the student career of the one, he may lose interest in his studies or might be he could not maintain that pace and enthusiasm after re-starting his further studies. Another advantage of the said is more appreciable if the one who is taking the said break for improvement of his skills, either taking admissions in any lingual course, computer technology or related field abilities enhancement that would result in some fruitful utilization of said time period. Again the disadvantage associated would be distraction of the person from his original goal and he/she may start having interest on later side. Some of the students also take part in some kind of voluntary work nearby that is for sure a better usage of leisure time. Many of the students engage themselves in some internships either paid or unpaid, that is obviously a worth paying step as it enhances their career capabilities and mentioning them in their portfolio increases the weightage of their resume as and when needed.
Summarizing up, it could be rightly said that anything has both lighter and darker shades, it is the one who decides how to utilize it for his favor or against. Taking a break from studies could be advantageous if the one may extract out some benefits out of it, otherwise, if shown, disadvantages may mask up the whole scenario.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 4.92783505155 284% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 26.3917525773 178% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 937.175257732 190% => OK
No of words: 362.0 206.0 176% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91988950276 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 3.78020617076 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70805483779 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 127.690721649 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566298342541 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 290.88556701 192% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.2489053181 44.8134815571 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 76.5299724578 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8461538462 16.8248392259 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201239772377 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111739059882 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.213651511357 0.0603063233224 354% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231356538671 0.12726935374 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.38500274846 0.0580467560999 663% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 8.37731958763 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 41.2886597938 218% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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