After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude.
In your letter:
Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing
Express your appreciation
And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.
Dear Ms. Sally Cooper,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for taking care of me while I was in the hospital. I am Sanjay and I was one of the patients that you looked after last month. I would like to invite you to my house as a token of gratitude for all your love and care.
As you know that I was seriously injured by an accident and broke my limb, I couldn't control that pain and agony. However, in those hard times, you are the only person who helped me to get better. I still remember the first day you have offered me food like a mother feeding her baby, I was so emotional at that time and that established an emotional connection with you. I wish you could be there all time by my side. I am really grateful to you because I wouldn't the person who I am now if you haven't looked after me for a month.
With all the love and affection, I would like to invite you along with your family to my house for a special dinner later next week, and I couldn't thank you enough for the support and care you have given.
Thank you once again.
Regards,
Sanjay
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ients that you looked after last month. I would like to invite you to my house as...
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Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...red by an accident and broke my limb, I couldnt control that pain and agony. However, i...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 420, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...you could be there all time by my side. I am really grateful to you because I wou...
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Line 5, column 458, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
.... I am really grateful to you because I wouldnt the person who I am now if you havent l...
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Line 5, column 497, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
... wouldnt the person who I am now if you havent looked after me for a month. With al...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 140, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...a special dinner later next week, and I couldnt thank you enough for the support and ca...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, really, so, still, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.16113744076 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1413620885 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535545023697 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.6078358234 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375342820291 0.216113520407 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143206041692 0.0766984524023 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560016772285 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18717334707 0.12726935374 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983052370187 0.0580467560999 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.85 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.