fter being involved in an accident you were looked after by a person you did not know before Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude In your letter Introduce yourself and let him her know why you are writing Express your appreciation An

Essay topics:

fter being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude.

In your letter:

Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing

Express your appreciation

And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

You do NOT need to write any address.

You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Mr. John,

I hope you are doing well.

I am Nancy, residing in 12 sweet Avenue, writing this letter to thank you regarding the help you provided me in the last three days.

You means a lot to me. Though, we are strangers for each other, but still you are taking care of my family and me by providing free ration and medical services. Unfortunately, after that bus accident, I was not able to do job , was totally dependant, at this situation you took great care of me. The physiotherapist sent by you everyday helps me to mobilize, made me able to move with the assistance of crutches now.

Without your help, It would be diicult to recover for me too fast.
I personally want to show my gratitude to you, but my physical condition cannot allow me to travel anywhere , so I request you to come my home and meet me and my family and let us show our hospitality.

I and my family is eagerly waiting you.

Best regards,
Nancy.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hope you are doing well. I am Nancy, residing in 12 sweet Avenue, writing thi...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... provided me in the last three days. You means a lot to me. Though, we are st...
^^
Line 7, column 7, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'You' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'mean'
Suggestion: mean
...ded me in the last three days. You means a lot to me. Though, we are strangers f...
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Line 7, column 228, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t bus accident, I was not able to do job , was totally dependant, at this situatio...
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Line 10, column 108, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ition cannot allow me to travel anywhere , so I request you to come my home and me...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, regarding, so, still, well, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47976878613 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56835371714 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682080924855 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1116167388 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229737176994 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991887063523 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05448704299 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134207430472 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411111801191 0.0580467560999 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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