we are living in the modern world and we have to face serious problems about the environment. One of the prominent problems is air pollution. Air pollution is caused by two specific reasons, which can be tackled by using appropriate measures. The first reason to be mentioned is human activities. People always litter everywhere and burn the rubbish without thinking of its consequences. Exhaust fumes from factories and vehicles are too much, so the level of air pollution is higher. Another reason is natural disasters. Drought often happens, which caused forest fires. This makes the air become more contaminated. There are several measures can be taken to deal with air pollution. The goverment should raise people's awareness. When people know the negative effects that air pollution creates, they will protect the environment more. We should plant more trees to protect our forests. To sum up, human activities and natural disasters are the main causes of air pollution. We have to take measures to protect the environment properly
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: hieu9
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
we are living in the modern world and we h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 32.9175257732 27% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20958083832 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71794289799 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634730538922 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3691154209 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.0 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.1333333333 16.8248392259 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344434181459 0.216113520407 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101944942574 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118653793254 0.0603063233224 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.344434181459 0.12726935374 271% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.75 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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