Dear Sir/Madam,
I, Divyasree, am writing this letter to ask for permission to join in the computer course which was advertised in ‘’ The Hindu’’ Newspaper. I would like to inform you that I had never done any course formally from the institutes, but, I was using the computer for so long to complete the mini-project works assigned by my lecturers.
In detail, I am a science graduate and come from a middle-class family. We do not have sources to join the expensive colleges to learn the basics of computers. Hence, I learnt them practically whenever I visited the internet café to do the project work.
Moreover, I can assure you that the knowledge learned so far would prove to you that I am an eligible candidate to gain further understanding of the computer. I would like to know if you can consider me to join the course on an exception basis. If you wish, I can give the exam, and then join in the intermediate level category in your institute, which could be beneficial for searching for a relevant job in computing.
I eagerly look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Divyasree Reddy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87692307692 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02992308897 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625641025641 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7244111678 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243750010262 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821688835128 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603109408015 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127528376888 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462914717446 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.