Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
• explain why you are writing
• describe your circumstances
• ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enroll in the course
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter in response to your advertisement published on 1st, April in The Tribune newspaper. I would like to enrol for the six months advanced computer course offered by your college. As it is stated in the advertisement, to register with this course applicant must complete a basic computer course. But unfortunately, I have never studied about computer before.
Allow me to express, I am really interested in learning about the computer, therefore, I started studying the basic computer skills from my friend who is studying computer science at Oxford University. Thus, I do not pose any certificate for the fundamental course which is essential to start this program.
I am a quick learner and quite excited about learning advanced computer skills. I always performed well in the other subjects and recently received a scholarship for my excellent performance.
In view of the above, I would really appreciate if you could allow me to enrol for the aforementioned course in your college for this semester in a special case.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Vishal Kumar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve never studied about computer before. Allow me to express, I am really interes...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ich is essential to start this program. I am a quick learner and quite excited a...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21081081081 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99376513051 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632432432432 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5805116863 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6363636364 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327841823849 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109314691739 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835946144032 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154961842073 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572442368038 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.