The bar chart below shows the proportions of English men and women of different ages who were living alone in 2011. The pie chart compares the numbers of bedrooms in these one-person households.
The bar chart bellows the percentages of English people who was living alone in 2011 based on their ages disparity . the pie chart provides information about how many bedrooms in these one-person housholds in the same year.
Overall, females were living alone than males in the older stages of their life. It is noticeable that majority of these household contained two bedrooms.
According to the bar chart, women who lived alone and aged from 65 to 85 or over is increased. Women made up around 72% in the 75-84 age category and reached the highest point by 75% at the age over 84. But during 50 to 64, the proportion of women and men lived alone are balanced. However, males preferred to live independence under aged of 50. Males lived alone in the 35 to 49 accounted for 65%.
In the pie chart, we can see that 35,4% of one-person household in england had 2 bedrooms. The person who living alone had similar proportion in 1 bedroom and 3 bedrooms just below 30%. One-person households with 4 bedrooms made up only 5.3% and 5 bedrooms are very rare and accounted a small percentages of the chart.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 32.9175257732 24% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66326530612 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54933540966 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617346938776 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.0911935697 44.8134815571 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.1666666667 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.527424568173 0.216113520407 244% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177121228828 0.0766984524023 231% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873900507225 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288956309254 0.12726935374 227% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103780029814 0.0580467560999 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.