A buider worked in your house a few weeks ago. You did not like the result of his work. Write a letter to him and say,
- Describe the work you wanted him to do.
- What is your complaint about job ?
- What do you expect him to do about is ?
Dear Sir,
I am Jay Thanki. My address is 38, G - Street, New Cramp Road. Before a couple of year I faced some issue with the platform of my kitchen. And to make it fix I called your office. They sent a person to my place to fix the problem.
Here I would like to tell you the person came to my home and fix the problem but still I am nt satisfy with his work. Firstly he reach to my home very late as he give me time. After reached he asked me what is issue kind of issue I was facing. As I was actually surprised that I had already explain every thing on call then why he was asking me again. As I again explain him every thing and he started his work. During the work he got many phone calls and he was waesting lot of time on talking on phone call. At last I lost my control and told him to he must not recive call and first give concentrate on the work then he got exhust and damage my chemni of stove. That was very rediculase and shameful. After complating work he told me to pay 200$, I argued him that the person who booked my service told me that there was only 50$ charge for that work.
Now, I am requesting you that please send a perosn to repair the chemni of stove without charging me any single cost and return my extra money which the person took from me.
Yours sincerely,
Jay Thanki
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ress is 38, G - Street, New Cramp Road. Before a couple of year I faced some issue wit...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun year seems to be countable; consider using: 'a couple of years'.
Suggestion: a couple of years
... 38, G - Street, New Cramp Road. Before a couple of year I faced some issue with the platform of...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 130, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'reaches'.
Suggestion: reaches
...am nt satisfy with his work. Firstly he reach to my home very late as he give me time...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 163, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
...tly he reach to my home very late as he give me time. After reached he asked me what...
^^^^
Line 9, column 177, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o my home very late as he give me time. After reached he asked me what is issue kind ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 292, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'explained'.
Suggestion: explained
...s actually surprised that I had already explain every thing on call then why he was ask...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 745, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$200'.
Suggestion: $200
...After complating work he told me to pay 200$, I argued him that the person who booke...
^^^^
Line 9, column 830, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$50'.
Suggestion: $50
... my service told me that there was only 50$ charge for that work. Now, I am re...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, so, still, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 55.0 32.9175257732 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 261.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.07279693487 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00138347348 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570881226054 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4573546717 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.4375 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4375 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133863612194 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470251318291 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538075301573 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643583084343 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503797710965 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.03 8.71597938144 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.