A Canadian friend recently sent you a present by post. You want to thank him/her.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- Say how you felt when you received the present
- Describe what you like about it
- Explain how you will use the present
Truly delighted – glad
I can’t thank you enough for the gift
Dear Sam,
Hope you are doing well. It has been a long time since we last met. I am writing this letter to thank you for sending me a gift.
To elucidate I felt delighted when I received a camera as a present. Although I was not expecting it however it came as a surprise as we haven't met for a long time. I am glad to have received this gift from you as was about to buy a camera. The camera has some interesting features first and foremost its optical zoom and the night vision sensor which captures clear pictures in low light. Secondly, its ability to transfer images over Wi-Fi to connected devices makes it easier to store images over multiple devices. Additionally, the best feature which makes stand out is that the camera is waterproof and can be used outdoors in rugged conditions. Lastly, the camera can also be used for capturing 4K videos with ultra stability image.
As you are aware that I travel regularly across India, therefore, I will use this camera for capturing some memorable pictures and videos.
Thanks again for sending this present and hope to meet you soon.
best wishes
Saud
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-05-31 | marasheed1763@gmail.com | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, Hope you are doing well. It has been a l...
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Line 4, column 138, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
... it however it came as a surprise as we havent met for a long time. I am glad to have ...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Best
...is present and hope to meet you soon. best wishes Saud
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Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and hope to meet you soon. best wishes Saud
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60301507538 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4160770575 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633165829146 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.222164104 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4615384615 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 4.34317383033 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207409288761 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823077353355 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860556663826 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164069015779 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525278088365 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.