You have just rented an unfurnished flat and a friend has told you that the Opportunity Shop in the shopping centre has cheap second-hand furniture.
Write to the shop owner describing:
what items do you need?
Asking whether they have these items?
what is the cost?
Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing this epistle to inquire about furniture items as I got your reference from one of my friends who recommended your shop as it sells cheap second-hand furniture items. let me explain in detail.
To elucidate, I have recently moved to Sydney from India and have leased out an unfurnished flat, therefore, I would need the following items immediately for my studio apartment which includes a queen size bed, a study table, a chair and a patio along with a coffee table. Additionally, I also need a shoe cabinet which needs to be waterproof as I will keep it outside in the balcony. could you let me know if you have all these items and in case of unavailability of such item what would be the delivery lead time. Although I have checked the website of your store, the second-hand section page showed all the items were available excluding the coffee table.
Lastly, I would appreciate if you could let me know the list price of goods mentioned above along with the applicable discount if possible. Please do indicate freight cost to my house.
I look forward to your response.
Yours faithfully
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, look, second, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74257425743 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65540419782 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643564356436 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.646415416 44.8134815571 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0909090909 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289201815919 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081533871775 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803233136328 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125732313272 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101436824751 0.0580467560999 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.