You have just rented an unfurnished flat and a friend has told you that the Opportunity Shop in the shopping centre has cheap second-hand furniture.
Write to the shop owner describing:
what items do you need?
Asking whether they have these items ?
what is the cost?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to enquire about couple of furniture item. One of my friend suggested me to contact with you for kind of Furniture on low price and best in quality. I have recently migrated in Toronto from India with my family. I might have to adjust my list accordingly as few of my personal item was shipped from India.
Actually, I have need of one king size bed, two children bunk along with mattresses for all. Additionally, one dining table i would need, do not include chairs, owner left for us to use. I was asked to check these item on the website but unfortunately, kid’s beds and mattresses are not available which led me check at the near by store at Charles Road, they suggest me to check personally at the Matt Robin store.
Therefore, I would urge you to please respond me if you have these items available at your store as I can not come due to other work, as well as I would be grateful if, you can attach the quote along with the other details while responding me.
I hope that my request will not cause you too much inconvenience.
Yours faithfully,
Anshul Gupta
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...for all. Additionally, one dining table i would need, do not include chairs, owne...
^
Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...not available which led me check at the near by store at Charles Road, they suggest me ...
^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ence. Yours faithfully, Anshul Gupta
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, but, if, so, therefore, well, while, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50490196078 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52478582158 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.1968005191 44.8134815571 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18687949192 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065647522971 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377659403416 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110630027817 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313539074932 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.