You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say– When did it happen?– Describe the problem.– Suggest what could be done about it.

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You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say
– When did it happen?
– Describe the problem.
– Suggest what could be done about it.

Dear Mr Matt,
I hope I am writing this letter to bring the concern infront of you about the issue with water leakage of kitchen tap. Moreover, tap will break due to the pressure. Problem suddenly started a day after when we moved in. it seems to me that this issue existed before.

More on the Trouble. While checking under the line, i found the root cause. Middle section of the pipe looks in very bad condition and i can see the hole because of rust. I had to relocate all the kitchen stuff which is now suffering my daily chore.

Certainly, pipe is old so has and i recommend it to be replaced with new. For temporary solution, Better to laydown the ruber pipe lane so i can setup everything in kitchen.

Therefore, I would say that do something without any delay to avoid devastating circumstances with leakage in the house.

Kinldy take prompt action about the issue.

Yours Sincerely

Anshul

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...Trouble. While checking under the line, i found the root cause. Middle section of...
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...he pipe looks in very bad condition and i can see the hole because of rust. I ha...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... which is now suffering my daily chore. Certainly, pipe is old so has and i reco...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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... Certainly, pipe is old so has and i recommend it to be replaced with new. F...
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Line 6, column 140, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...etter to laydown the ruber pipe lane so i can setup everything in kitchen. Th...
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Message: Did you mean 'can set up'?
Suggestion: can set up
...ter to laydown the ruber pipe lane so i can setup everything in kitchen. Therefore, I...
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Line 14, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... the issue. Yours Sincerely Anshul
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, so, therefore, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4171376644 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.728395061728 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8831965127 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.1538461538 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4615384615 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17520869307 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047135754969 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519863052701 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692812378108 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585793338473 0.0580467560999 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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