You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say
– When did it happen?
– Describe the problem.
– Suggest what could be done about it.
<p style="white-space: normal;">Dear Mr Matt,<br>I am writing this letter to bring the concern in front of you on the issue with water leakage of kitchen tap on the first floor of your house which were rented last month. Moreover, tap will break due to the pressure. Problem suddenly started after 10 days when we moved in. it seems to me that this issue existed before.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">More on the Trouble. While checking under the line, I found the root cause. Middle section of the pipe looks in very bad condition and I can see the hole because of rust. I had to relocate all the kitchen stuff which is now suffering my daily chore.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">Certainly, pipe is old so has and I recommend it to be replaced with new. For temporary solution, Better to lay down the rubber pipe lane so I can set up everything in kitchen back.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">Therefore, I would say that do something without any delay to avoid devastating circumstances with leakage in the house.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">I hope you will take prompt action about the issue.</p><p style="white-space: normal;">Yours Sincerely</p><p style="white-space: normal;">Anshul</p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...;white-space: normal;'>Dear Mr Matt,
I am writing this letter to bring the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, moreover, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89784946237 4.54256449028 130% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.38868744357 2.54303337028 212% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693548387097 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.253310104 44.8134815571 311% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 137.125 76.5299724578 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0914803633666 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410239358 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427261457447 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914803633666 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 8.37731958763 215% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 70.7449484536 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.24 8.71597938144 198% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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