The chart below shows the average percentages in typical meals of three type of Nutrients,all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much
The pie charts illustrate how much sodium, saturated fat and added sugar were consumed in the average meal in the United States, the over-consumption, which may have a detrimental effect on health.
Overall, it is clear that Americans consume lunch and dinner, which are rich in Sodium & saturated fat, whereas their snacks contain a large portion of added sugar. Also, breakfast is the least nutrient-dense, which is revealed by the noticeably fewer percentage in all the pie charts.
Regarding breakfast, citizens consume less amount of nutrients ranging from 14% to 16% in the morning time. The ratio of Sodium saturated fat & added sugar enhance during lunch time amounting for 29%,26% and 19% respectively. Most of the Americans eat the maximum amount of added sugar in snacks as compare to other nutrients, which are recorded as 14% and 21%.
Turning to dinner, citizens consume the largest amount of sodium in dinner, which is about double the sugar and 6% more than saturated fat.
- The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year 78
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 84
- The chart below shows the average percentages in typical meals of three type of Nutrients all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much 73
- The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the samepark today 78
- The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, regarding, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 32.9175257732 9% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17283950617 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73858563478 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617283950617 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 28.955278677 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.714285714 76.5299724578 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12577738496 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637353755843 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629575850118 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866539956754 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593970000632 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 8.37731958763 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.