The charts below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2000 and 2010, with projected sales for 2020.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
The charts indicate the total magazines sold per person in five countries, namely in 2000, 2010 and anticipated turnover for 2020.
It’s clear from the graph that magazines in three countries include Country A, Country B and Country C were the best-sellers in 2000 among three years 2000,2010 and 2020. By contrast, other countries, Country D and Country E combined, had the lowest figure for those buying elements in 2000 far and wide.
On the one hand, Country A, B and C are having a tendency to decrease the demand for magazines per person throughout 2000, 2010 and 2020. Country B has the first-rate sales in all three years, especially it reached the highest point of 50 magazines in 2000 and are expected to experience a minimal deterioration by 45 magazines in 2020. Apart from Country B, Country A and C have been declining the factor for magazines from 49 magazines and 37 magazines in 2000 to 38 and 31 in 2020 respectively by far.
On the other hand, Country D and E always have the least magazines sold in this period, particularly, Country E has the slightest sales among the five countries. Noticeably, the number of buying magazines have been recovering slowly from 19 magazines in 2000 to 21 in 2020. Along Country D, Country E sold only 7 magazines per person in 2000 and went up by 9 magazines in 2010. In spite of this slight growth, the figure for buying magazines are similar to its number at the beginning of the period.
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- The charts below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2000 and 2010, with projected sales for 2020.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant. 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, apart from, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 32.9175257732 18% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 255.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70196078431 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72413282605 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474509803922 0.622605031667 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 343.8 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 28.9108975993 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.9 76.5299724578 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 16.8248392259 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355079711488 0.216113520407 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184807144157 0.0766984524023 241% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749598696231 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265632018445 0.12726935374 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494548958254 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.