The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the bar graph illustrates the air pollution levels of different countries which have been affected by different aspects such as electricity generation, transport, and industry in 2012. With China being the most affected country within these 4 countries.
to start with, the most pollution are produced by china with industry releasing 80 ppm with transport releasing 70ppm and electricity generates roughly 58ppm. the maximum pollution in America comes from transport which affects the air by 58 ppm followed by electricity generation and industry slightly having the same number 31 and 29 ppm .
japan is the second least affected country,with the industry having the maximum air pollution of 42 ppm. transport in japan is less than other two countries with 30 ppm and electricity generation being the least out of all the four countries 25ppm.
Australia's electricity generation releases 19 ppm, transport and industry release 18 and 17 ppm compared two other countries
Overall, it is clear that much pollution is produced by China, especially from Industrial companies. However, America's transportation release much more gases into the air than others apart from China.the minimum polluted counties is Australia.

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2021-05-04 kaustubh kshirsagar 84 view

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, apart from, such as, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 32.9175257732 9% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52406417112 4.54256449028 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88666150111 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577540106952 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.1747698966 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.125 76.5299724578 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 4.34317383033 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110507472887 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639301270945 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418817374461 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741757550751 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446473648145 0.0580467560999 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 8.37731958763 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 8.71597938144 172% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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