Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village.
The diagram illustrates the development of the village of Chorleywood as the number of its population rises between the years of 1868 and 1994. Overall, the picture marks improvements in roadworks from casual roads to modernized roadways and also depicts the increase in number of people residing in Chorleywood town during those particular dates.
Firstly, by the year 1868 to 1883 there are main roads constructed adjacent to the small town. In 1883 to 1922, the town grew more than twice its size. A railway was built in the southern part of the village as early as 1909. The village has its very own train station. Lastly, construction of the motorway was started in 1970 at the eastern part of the town, this coincides with the particular increase in the number of people settling in Chorleywood from the year 1922 to 1970. The map also represents that there is a park and golf course erected at the center of the town, however the date of construction was not defined by the illustration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, lastly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 32.9175257732 18% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82558139535 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68458633421 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563953488372 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.4303467351 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.75 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110581355497 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492990613825 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459802687265 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986349517134 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359561551301 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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