City council is planning to pull down one of the historic buildings in your town, because they do not have funds to renovate it.
As a citizen, you don’t want it to happen. Write a letter to the city council and say
– What is the importance of the building?
– Why should it be renovated?
– Suggest a plan to raise funds and maintain the building in the future.
Dear Sir/Madam,
Yesterday I heard that the city council is planning to pull down the Galle clock tower which is in the Galle fort, due to lack of funds to renovate it.
This clock tower was built during the Dutch era and believed to be once of an ancient monument in Sri Lanka. This adds a great value and it is one of a main land marks in Sri Lanka. The Dutch clock tower shows how beautiful is the Dutch architecture and it adds a significant value to the people of Galle.
This tower is one of a main attraction for tourists, and lots of people will loose their main income as they depends on tourism. Also when you picture it from Galle cricket stadium, which is bit far from the Galle fort, you can capture a nice picture and this clock tower adds a quiet nice look to it. Apart from that, for Galle people this clock tower shows the time as this is visible from almost every location of the city. By looking at these points, i hope you can understand the importance of renovating this.
Because of these importance I believe the best option would be to renovate it. As one of a Galle citizen, I think we can start a raffel draw and a carnival to raise the funds which is required to renovate this historical monument. Also the carnival will bring joy to the people of Galle and will raise the funds in no time.
yours,
Faithfully,
Nethandun Wijethilaka
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'mark'?
Suggestion: mark
...reat value and it is one of a main land marks in Sri Lanka. The Dutch clock tower sho...
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Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is the Dutch architecture and it adds a significant value to the people of Galle...
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Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...n for tourists, and lots of people will loose their main income as they depends on to...
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Line 7, column 110, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'depend'
Suggestion: depend
...le will loose their main income as they depends on tourism. Also when you picture it f...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ain income as they depends on tourism. Also when you picture it from Galle cricket ...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
...it from Galle cricket stadium, which is bit far from the Galle fort, you can captur...
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Line 7, column 457, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...f the city. By looking at these points, i hope you can understand the importance ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the importance of renovating this. Because of these importance I believe the best ...
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Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this importance' or 'these importances'?
Suggestion: this importance; these importances
...ance of renovating this. Because of these importance I believe the best option would be to r...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...d to renovate this historical monument. Also the carnival will bring joy to the peop...
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Line 9, column 325, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le and will raise the funds in no time. yours, Faithfully, Nethandun Wijethila...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...d will raise the funds in no time. yours, Faithfully, Nethandun Wijethilaka
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, apart from, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 254.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43700787402 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29047593145 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496062992126 0.622605031667 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.3785059926 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9166666667 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143505779537 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564584048766 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645483687304 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894517887963 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884892229623 0.0580467560999 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.