City living in 21st century is stressful and offers no advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In my opinion living in a 21st-century city presents more disadvanges than advantages, even though nowadays cities are widely thought to be the place to live.
One of the first disadvatanges I can think of is traffic. Traffic itself is a cause of stress among drivers and citizens in general. A moltitude of cars in the same place is more likely to be caught into accidents. Therefore traffic may be considered dangerous. Traffic also affects the environment, causing pollition, noise and possible consequent diseases, such as asthma. Last winter, Milan, second largest city in Italy, had to face serious problems, due to the high level of pollution and the absence of rain for several weeks.
It is almost a matter of fact that cities are over-crowded nowadays. People living in large cities may feel stressed by the general chaos, for example when using public transport. It is true that there are plenty of facilities in big cities, but it might be difficult for them to be of some benefit to all citizens. Over-crowding often affect cities by making them dirty, for instance, from my personal experience, London, Sydney and Paris. Big cities are also believed to be dangerous and more exposed to crimes than towns, but a recent study showed that Melbourne, second largest city in Australia, is the safest and most livable city in the world, and I agree with it.
Large cities may lack of affordable housing and rents might be too high for an average income. Bills, food, transport and the overall cost of living are sometimes extremely expensive. This can lead to an increasing criminality, and it might be a reason why some people prefer to live in smaller cities or towns. As stated, cities are sometimes expensive, but on the other hand they offer more job opportunities and sometimes jobs in big cities are better paid than anywhere else.
Concluding, I believe today's cities are stressful and chaotic and I agree they offer few advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ore likely to be caught into accidents. Therefore traffic may be considered dangerous. Tr...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in general, such as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 7.48453608247 294% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 5.05154639175 337% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 937.175257732 174% => OK
No of words: 330.0 206.0 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94242424242 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 3.78020617076 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68964787534 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 127.690721649 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587878787879 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 290.88556701 179% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1950788882 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9411764706 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 4.34317383033 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.49484536082 602% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190628028712 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579625176646 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574429630627 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12496648461 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541784863689 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 41.2886597938 206% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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