Dear Mr Ryan Lee,
I regret to inform you that I cannot attend your farewell party which, you are organizing, on the 31st of August. According to company policy I have to carry out a quality check and perform an audit of inventory at the factory at the end of every month. Since I will be occupied the whole day I will not be able to make it back in time for the party.
However, let me tell you about the good memories we had. Firstly, you never hesitated to help me even though you were senior in position. Secondly, you have amazing management and teamwork skills, which helped us onboard many important projects and also gave us exposure in client facing roles. Lastly, You have been more like a friend than a colleague and I am deeply saddened to see you leave. All the stressful yet fun times we had together will be greatly missed.
Therefore, I am looking forward to continuing our friendship and staying in contact. Please save my personal mobile number (987654321) and email address - marysmith@yahoo.com. In addition, I hope we do not break our tradition of going out for dinner every Friday after work.
Thank you for your contribution and wishing you all the best for your future endeavors.
Yours Faithfully,
Mary Smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1034.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74311926606 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65044009111 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.701834862385 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9367333287 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5384615385 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 4.34317383033 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347070103053 0.216113520407 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106668067271 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0989300210509 0.0603063233224 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189526973912 0.12726935374 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104538523351 0.0580467560999 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.