As the saying goes "all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." So, learning a team sport is definitely an important part of a child's education. it helps in the overall development of the child and also helps in keeping the child active. Playing in a team inculcates the value of team work, sharing and discipline. From a very young age the child is taught to be punctual for practices, support your team mates when the game gets tough and many other values, thus molding them into better individuals.
In addition, I have personally been a part of the women's basketball team. Playing a sport along with my formal education played a vital role in my early years. We had to start early and reach school an hour before it starts for basketball practice. We would start with warm up exercises and then move ahead with the practices for at least an hour. As a result, till today I have a habit to wake up early and do some light exercise before I start my day. Furthermore, whenever we would go for an inter school basketball tournament our teachers would conduct extra lectures so as to not fall back in our studies. Even today I represent my company in basketball and got a lot of trophies and accolades.
I therefore, agree that every child should learn at least one sport. There is no age to start leaning, However, starting at an early age has it's own benefits. Initially, it will be tough, but during the course of time the journey will become smooth and sports will become a part of your life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Line 3, column 493, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...r teachers would conduct extra lectures so as to not fall back in our studies. Even toda...
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Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'during'.
Suggestion: during
...efits. Initially, it will be tough, but during the course of time the journey will become smooth and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, as to, at least, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52554744526 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50145676561 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602189781022 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9463145118 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5714285714 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254018343162 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790957735072 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625588656959 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169409991071 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784608324707 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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