Write a letter to a friend to ask for his/her help to collect money for a charity organization. The letter needs to cover the following details:
-Why do you want to collect money for the charity organization
-Ask for your friend to help
-Explain in detail how your friend can help
Dear Jane,
How are you? I am writing to inform you that I have recently collaborated with a non profit organization that educates under privileged children. Currently they are planning to build a school to provide free education, however they are short of funds. As you know I am a firm believer that no child must be deprived of the right to education and hence, I want this project to be a success.
As far as I can remember, we both share the same aspirations, for you volunteer as a computer teacher at the local school. Therefore, I request you to please contribute to this cause and spread the news with everyone.
Let me explain what can you do to help. Firstly please donate generously, because irrespective of the amount no contribution is small. Secondly, publish this article in the local newspaper which, is read by everyone, to grab more eyeballs. Lastly, spread the word among your peers and neighbors, who may also be involved with similar initiatives.
I hope together we can make a change provide a brighter future to these children.
Your friends,
Mary
- As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people traveling, there is a growing demand for more flights. what problems does this have on the environment? what measures could be taken? 89
- Some people believe that the libraries are a waste of resources and money so computers should replace them However others do not agree Discuss both sides and give your opinion 78
- Although many people value their public parks, this space could be better used for other purposes such as residential areas for the ever growing population or to develop business and boost economies. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
- Reading books keeps a person’s mind active, whereas watching films and television is passive and does not require a person to use their imagination.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 78
- Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinions in this? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86559139785 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79985732917 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672043010753 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1753083375 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4166666667 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 4.34317383033 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100075497625 0.216113520407 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352134501137 0.0766984524023 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398658726242 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0490605622407 0.12726935374 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300965086659 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.