Nowadays a lot of study material is readily available online as compared to earlier where people relied on studying in a classroom. Many are of the opinion that online learning is a better way to learn, while others believe it does not have the same effect as learning in person in a real school. In this essay I shall discuss both the options and give my opinion.
Firstly, when you learn online you can do it in the comfort of your home and the timings suitable to you. Also, it saves your time on traveling to a class. Additionally, more and more universities and institutions are offering their courses online thus reaching out to a larger audience. Secondly, due to our busy lives, devoting time to classroom studies seems difficult, in such a situation online studies is the preferred medium of learning.
However, that being said, studying in a school has its own advantages. Since, here a teacher is present, the students are given personal attention and also any doubts or queries that arises during the course of learning can be resolved immediately. In addition, schools are a safe place for discussion where people are encouraged to share their views and ideas. Apart from formal learning, students also get to interact with one another and develop social skills, as a result preparing them for their future.
In conclusion, I would prefer online learning as opposed to real school learning as I believe they offer much more variety and flexibility in learning. Although, schools have a lot of studying options to choose from, in the future more and more learnings will be online based because of its increase in demand.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Now a days a lot of study material is readily avai...
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Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
Now a days a lot of study material is readily avai...
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Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'during'.
Suggestion: during
... also any doubts or queries that arises during the course of learning can be resolved immediately. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85053380783 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60960638133 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604982206406 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4415153879 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.846153846 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371333411802 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121212082823 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116424382654 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228625621682 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111191153541 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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