Economic growth is inevitable and all the countries in the world are aiming for it. This is primarily because an economic sound country is advantageous to both the society as well as to an individual. On the other hand, in the race for development certain areas maybe compromised, but the pros far outweigh the cons.
Firstly, at an individual level, development means having access to better infrastructure, quality education and employment opportunities. This is turn lead to higher standard of living and increase in spending capacity. Now at a society level since every person is educated and employed, they invest their talents and resources in uplifting their society. Secondly, many refrain from going abroad because all their requirements are met in their home country itself. These small contributions later enables the country to turn into a superpower.
Conversely, economic development is largely dependent on technology. It focuses on majorly on automation and reducing manpower. As a result, people who are working in the Information Technology and Research and Development department may flourish, but others may be at the risk of loosing their jobs. For instance, many airports in the world are retrenching their front office staff and setting up various automated check-in station.
Keeping that in mind, all jobs cannot be replaced by robots and some professions such as doctors and teachers need a human touch. When a country is stable they invest more in the well-being of their citizens and make sure that everybody is on par with the vision of the country. For example, they teach their older population to have a hands on with technology as well as emphasis on teaching computer coding in schools.
To recapitulate, development may have some drawbacks on certain sections of the society, however, economic growth ensures improved quality of life and being up to date with rapidly changing technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...try is advantageous to both the society as well as to an individual. On the other hand, in...
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Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun refrain seems to be countable; consider using: 'many refrains'.
Suggestion: many refrains
...s in uplifting their society. Secondly, many refrain from going abroad because all their req...
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Line 7, column 335, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a hand' or simply 'hands'?
Suggestion: a hand; hands
...ey teach their older population to have a hands on with technology as well as emphasis ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92279933375 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594155844156 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5932174734 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204278292386 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653869637831 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620602735225 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121206303785 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820961950097 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.