Dear Rose,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I will be moving to Singapore for further studies. I am planning to get a masters degree in Human Resource. Since, I have applied for a full time course, I will be free on weekends. It's a two year program and will give me a better understanding in Human Resources. Once my results are out I will apply for the course.
In addition, to completing my studies I am looking to get a part-time job. However, this will be the first time I' ll be living on my own and I need to be able to pay my own rent and bills. Additionally, Singapore is also an expensive city. Currently, I'm looking out for a weekend job as I will have some time to spare. I can also gain some experience in the interim. This will further help me, when I complete my studies and start looking out for jobs.
Could you kindly help me in finding a job? Since you have been in Singapore for almost two years now, you might have a better idea about part-time job opportunities. Also, since you too worked part-time while studying could you please put in a word for me. It will be my first international trip and I am looking forward to meeting you.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Your Friend
Katie
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... writing this letter to inform you that i will be moving to Singapore for further...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...oving to Singapore for further studies. Im planning to get a masters degree in Hum...
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Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...asters degree in Human Resource. Since, Ive applied for a full time course, I will ...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...uman Resource. Since, Ive applied for a full time course, I will be free on weekends. Its...
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Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ime course, I will be free on weekends. Its a two year program and will give me a b...
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Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Once
...etter understanding in Human Resources. once my results are out I will apply for the...
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Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...b. However, this will be the first time Ill be living on my own and I need to be ab...
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Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...e is also an expensive city. Currently, Im looking out for a weekend job as I will...
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Line 7, column 322, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...rnational trip and I am looking forward to meet you. I look forward to hearing from ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, look, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34782608696 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52584373595 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552173913043 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6719537478 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.8235294118 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5294117647 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94117647059 4.34317383033 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283633821349 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993006941969 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823192579541 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16889358064 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846860418913 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.