Your friend just had a baby. You decided to prepare present for them. Write a letter and say
- congratulate your friend
- ask when would be possible for you to visit
- ask what present they would like
Hi John,
I am writing this letter to congratulate you and Becca on this joyous occasion of your first born child. Fiona and me were so delighted when we got to know this news.
How is she keeping? we seen the pictures on facebook and she looks very cute and healthy. Both of us are looking forward to meet you'll and the baby as soon as possible. In this event of happiness we have decided to get a present for your little princess. Yesterday, we visited the nearby mall and were excited to see quite alot of options for gifts. Could you please let me know what gift would want for us to get for your baby?
Also, please let me know the best day and time, so that we can drop by and meet her.
Thanks,
Kelly
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi John, I am writing this letter to congratulate...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elighted when we got to know this news. How is she keeping? we seen the pictures...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 21, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...w this news. How is she keeping? we seen the pictures on facebook and she l...
^^
Line 6, column 24, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'saw'?
Suggestion: saw
...his news. How is she keeping? we seen the pictures on facebook and she looks ...
^^^^
Line 6, column 122, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...healthy. Both of us are looking forward to meet youll and the baby as soon as possible....
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 130, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
... Both of us are looking forward to meet youll and the baby as soon as possible. In th...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...we can drop by and meet her. Thanks, Kelly
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 588.0 937.175257732 63% => OK
No of words: 138.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26086956522 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42743929552 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04758555261 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673913043478 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 171.9 290.88556701 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0699185233 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.3333333333 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199947598612 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659288729672 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864830658345 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109452782953 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845930152627 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.84 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.