These days, it has become increasingly common for people to take up multiple jobs during their career and also to switch midway to pursue their passions. The concept of having a single career is perceived as old fashion and people are opting to have several careers or looking for means to earn some extra money along with studying throughout their life. In this essay we shall discuss why people should studying along with managing multiple careers.
To begin with, initially people preferred having a relaxed life and once they were settled in their careers, they tried to make ends meet using all their resources. Additional means of earning money was too cumbersome and people were content with their limited earnings. According to a survey conducted by the Guardian, people from the earlier generation preferred working in a government company and in the same position until retirement, however, the current generation does not share the same view. They believe in making hay while the sun shines!
Pursuing different careers along with continuous educations helps one to remain updated. Along with gaining knowledge, it also helps in developing some new skills and techniques thus making you a competitive candidate in the job market. Nowadays many people manage a full time job during the week and take up part-time jobs during the weekend along with enrolling for some online courses, therefore effectively managing their time. This not only enables them to earn an extra buck but also makes their resume stronger.
In conclusion, until people have the capacity, efforts should be made to earn more in order to live comfortably. There is no upper age limit to learn and people need to polish their skills in order to remain relevant. However, once this trend gains momentum will it be good or bad? Mostly the predictions have been positive as more people prefer having multiple careers and further education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...b market. Nowadays many people manage a full time job during the week and take up part-ti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11428571429 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45089645314 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596825396825 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4857340416 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.071428571 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222374924395 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792810493825 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938294259893 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133146168934 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076669361139 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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