During the initial years it is the responsibility of parents to maintain the overall well-being and development of a child. However, once they start schooling, this slowly changes and teachers begin to have more influence on their lives. Does this trend indicate that parents start loosing control over their children? This notion is absolutely preposterous. In my opinion, both are equally are responsible in disciplining and developing the child intellectually and socially.
To begin with, parents are considered to be - "first teachers" as children imitate and replicate the behavior and language they observe at home. Children spend more time at home rather than at school and hence, the onus of child development cannot be entirely placed on teachers. On the other hand, children also idolize their teachers and crave for their attention and thus, try their best to impress them by learning quickly. To cite an example, a child who was showered with appreciation and attention showed better signs improvement than those who were neglected and unappreciated.
Furthermore, it is the duty of teachers to make the child more socially aware along with developing their intelligence. Their teachings provides the base of all their future learning's and also carves a path in forming their personality. Moreover, parents should also play their part by encouraging children to read more and play outdoors or pick up a sport instead of just staying glued to the television. They should inhibit good manners and habits so that it becomes second nature of the child.
In recapitulate, I believe parents and teachers both play a major role in shaping the future of the child. In the end, children will listen to those who capture their imagination and are not abusive in enforcing their ideologies, thereby both have to maintain extreme caution.
- TPO-20 - Independent Writing TaskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 89
- In any field of endeavor it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field 11
- Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences.Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion. 73
- Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance such as food and housing To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- You have lost an item of value on train.Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter•1-Describe the item•2-Explain where and when you left it•3-Say what action you would like the company to take 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 392, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...terous. In my opinion, both are equally are responsible in disciplining and develop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, moreover, second, so, thus, well, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27702702703 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89244599039 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584459459459 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0859045485 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.133333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265879942642 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863451439502 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666133569973 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157606318442 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381299566614 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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