an essay presenting pros and cons of owning a mobile
In the last couple of decades, there has been a tremendous step forward in the world of technology that was the start of the mobile. These days, it isn’t too hard for us to own a phone. It is a useful device, but it has its disadvantages.
There are benefits to owning a mobile. To begin with, using mobile phones is one of popular methods for people to communicate, unwind and do trade. By using call or video phone, text message, we can keep in touch even over a long distance. Furthermore, we can easily save all memories thanks to the camrea phone function. In addition, the phone also helps us to remember important data.
Nevertheless, mobile phones still affect gravely on wellbeing, time and communication of individuals. Utilizing mobile phone for a long time without break is definitely bad for your health because of the possible radiation from cell phones. Another drawback of owning a mobile is you will have to pay a fee to take care of your phone.
Using mobile phones is very important in today’s world, but we need to make sure that we will use it effectively.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, nevertheless, so, still, well, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82887700535 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.68569867622 2.54303337028 145% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.928232338 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.25 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0995609026091 0.216113520407 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434076807433 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438177636832 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619902043134 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287009700354 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.