Essay topics: You had an appointment with the bank and now you realized that you can't make it for that .write a letter to the manager
-Give details about your appointment and dates.
-Explain the reason why you cannot make it.
-Ask for other dates.
Dear Sir ,
I am sadhana,I am writing you to reschedule my appointment at the bank about home loan .I had a meeting fixed with you on 25th june 2019 regarding home loan.Unfortunatly I will not be make it on that day. I apologise for the inconvenience caused because of this .
my uncle arriving from Canada for one week.which happens to be in the last week of june . I have to be with them for entire week.Thats why I cancelled all my appointment of this week.my uncle come after long time in India.So I want to take break from my work and I will have plan for family trip.I will going to Somnath temple in Gujarat.Which is the most oldest shiv temple.
I will be very graceful if you could reschedule our appointment for any day in the first week of july.you can call me at 353647745 or you can email me at sadhanaamee@gmail.com.
Once again I am sorry for the inconvenience .
Yours faithfully,
sadhana.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Dear Sir , I am sadhana,I am writing you to r...
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Line 4, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
Dear Sir , I am sadhana,I am writing you to reschedule my appoint...
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Line 4, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... appointment at the bank about home loan .I had a meeting fixed with you on 25th j...
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Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ppointment at the bank about home loan .I had a meeting fixed with you on 25th ju...
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Line 4, column 158, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Unfortunatly
...u on 25th june 2019 regarding home loan.Unfortunatly I will not be make it on that day. I ap...
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Line 4, column 262, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...the inconvenience caused because of this . my uncle arriving from Canada for ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...nvenience caused because of this . my uncle arriving from Canada for one week...
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Line 7, column 88, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...h happens to be in the last week of june . I have to be with them for entire week....
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Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thats
... I have to be with them for entire week.Thats why I cancelled all my appointment of t...
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Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
... I have to be with them for entire week.Thats why I cancelled all my appointment of t...
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Line 7, column 223, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
....my uncle come after long time in India.So I want to take break from my work and I...
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Line 7, column 276, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
...take break from my work and I will have plan for family trip.I will going to Somnath...
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Line 7, column 297, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...rk and I will have plan for family trip.I will going to Somnath temple in Gujarat...
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Line 7, column 304, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...I will have plan for family trip.I will going to Somnath temple in Gujarat.Which is t...
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Line 7, column 339, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Which
...will going to Somnath temple in Gujarat.Which is the most oldest shiv temple. I ...
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Line 7, column 339, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...will going to Somnath temple in Gujarat.Which is the most oldest shiv temple. I ...
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Line 7, column 352, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'oldest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: oldest
... Somnath temple in Gujarat.Which is the most oldest shiv temple. I will be very gracef...
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Line 7, column 352, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the oldest'.
Suggestion: most the oldest
... Somnath temple in Gujarat.Which is the most oldest shiv temple. I will be very gracef...
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Line 11, column 44, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e again I am sorry for the inconvenience . Yours faithfully, sadhana.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61585365854 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14420403138 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65243902439 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.7494369665 44.8134815571 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 108.142857143 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 2.54639175258 746% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261013319296 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106039586462 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819700280095 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155602424012 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890211595617 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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