Essay topics: You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family
for six months and look after their six- year-old child.
Write a letter to the parents. In your letter
- Explain why you would like the job
- give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
- say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter, in connection with an advertisement from a popular magazine, requiring a stay for 6 months and taking care of your kid.
I love taking up this opportunity, as it will help my financial status lifted and additionally fulfilling my basic needs. Although, the current market demands are high, i am finding it hard to get a job. Hence, this choice will get off the stress levels.
I have been looking after my niece and nephew for almost 5 years now along with my sister's family while i stayed with them during my graduation studies. Needless to say, i become a kid when playing with them and baby sitting when they are out for work. Now that, they are moving out to a different city on job demands, i am interested in moving in with you for the requested period, provided that, you are happy with me. Even though there are lots of options, I choose this, as child care interests me.
Furthermore, i will be preparing for my certification, during the free time. Waiting to hear from you, on this.
Yours faithfully,
Ruby
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter, in connection ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...6 months and taking care of your kid. I love taking up this opportunity, as it...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...h, the current market demands are high, i am finding it hard to get a job. Hence,...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...hoice will get off the stress levels. I have been looking after my niece and n...
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Line 7, column 110, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... now along with my sisters family while i stayed with them during my graduation s...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...my graduation studies. Needless to say, i become a kid when playing with them and...
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Line 7, column 325, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...out to a different city on job demands, i am interested in moving in with you for...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ose this, as child care interests me. Furthermore, i will be preparing for my ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... care interests me. Furthermore, i will be preparing for my certification,...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e. Waiting to hear from you, on this. Yours faithfully, Ruby
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou, on this. Yours faithfully, Ruby
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, look, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60416666667 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60805959027 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661458333333 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2406159247 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3636363636 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174202930722 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572875007191 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520154915099 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932036796125 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629140850257 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.