Essay topics:
You have bought a new mobile phone and in a few days of purchase, it has stopped working. You have spoken to the company representative a week ago but it has still not been repaired.Write the letter to the company, in your letter:-Introduce yourself-Explain the situation and ask for a solution.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in reference to raise a formal complaint regarding a cellphone device that has been purchased last week.
I have bought a Samsung Note 8 phone from your Danforth outlet on July 18, and it was a new edition with 8 GB RAM and 64 GB built-in storage. Initially, the phone was performing wonderfully, but two days later, it has started malfunctioning. It hangs with the frequent application crashing several times. To make the matter worse, it gets extremely heated, battery drains out so fast and then restarts once again. I am totally annoyed with the situation and went back to the outlet and talked to the service representative. As he suggested, I deposited my mobile there to have a repair. Three days later, he sent back my mobile to my home address, mentioning that is it has been fixed perfectly. To my utter disappointment, the phone is still restarting with an additional problem of a less-responsive touch screen.
As the issue is not completely resolved, I would like to ask for a replacement with a new one on an urgent basis within a fortnight. Otherwise, I want a full refund of my money. For your information, my invoice number is 123456SAM, dated on 1st May and I have paid via my credit card.
I look forward to seeing your prompt action regarding this matter.
Yours faithfully,
Jakir Alam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'phone' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'phones'.
Suggestion: phones
...week. I have bought a Samsung Note 8 phone from your Danforth outlet on July 18, a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, may, regarding, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9566538046 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651063829787 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4931966081 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5714285714 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157848921378 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467339219644 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393415662403 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771834423771 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382042578427 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.