A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening.
Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:
explain arrangements you have made for them to have keys and get into the house
tell your relative how to get from the train station to your house
say when you will be home and suggest what you could do together that evening
Dear ABC,
I hope you are in good spirits my brother. I am happy to know that you will be coming today in the morning hours. I apologize for not being able to receive you at the train station. As, I will be working early in the office due to the new responsibilities because of the recent promotion I got. I promise you we will have a great evening together. So, let me brief you about the arrangements further.
First, you will take a taxi right from the third gate of departure. This will cost you around Rs,120/- and he will take you to Rajguru Nagar the area where I live and in the centre of the society you will find my place which is house no. 256.
Then take the keys of the house from my neighbour residing in 255, they are a great family and will offer you all the help with your luggage and belongings. Please take off the shoes at the foot mate near the front door. Everything is ready for your comfort if you want snacks you can have them from the kitchen cupboard, make tea for yourself as you must be tired from the hectic travelling. I have cooked plenty of delicious food for you and kept it in the refrigerator.
In the evening I will be back and bring some drinks and friends from workplace to welcome you. Moreover, I have even planned a game night especially for both of us after the party is over. I have selected your favourite genre of movies to watch late at night while having popcorn.
I will try as soon as possible to be back at home. See you later.
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ture. This will cost you around Rs,120/- and he will take you to Rajguru Nagar th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, then, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 285.0 206.0 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22807017544 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28737485298 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589473684211 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9967408437 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8823529412 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7647058824 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52941176471 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431761721176 0.216113520407 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142749926636 0.0766984524023 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662641625919 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243909272542 0.12726935374 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062014811643 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.42 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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