"Finding it hard to remember importsnt facts and figures? Improve your memory in 10 weeks with our Memory Course. Places are limited and the course is available for only a short time." Ypu see the above advertisement for a course designed to help improve

Essay topics:

"Finding it hard to remember importsnt facts and figures? Improve your memory in 10 weeks with our Memory Course. Places are limited and the course is available for only a short time." Ypu see the above advertisement for a course designed to help improve your memory. Write a letter to the organisers of the course.

Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to you to get more information about the course to help people who have problems in memory on your advertisement.
I am a girl at the age of twenty two and I am a student at a uinversity which major in researching so I am often under pressure of studying.
When I am in a communication, my mind suddenly went blank. I forget what I am going to say. And this problem happens quite frequently. I also forget what I need to do on a day if I do not make a schedule.
I would like to know some information about the methods used on the course. I have tried some methods to improve my problems but they are not effective clearly. I also wonder about the course fees and when it will begin.
I am looking forward to hearing from you and I hope my memory can be improved after participating in your course.
Your faithfully
Annie

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-two
...vertisement. I am a girl at the age of twenty two and I am a student at a uinversity whic...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...age of twenty two and I am a student at a uinversity which major in researching s...
^
Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n about the methods used on the course. I have tried some methods to improve my p...
^
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ems but they are not effective clearly. I also wonder about the course fees and w...
^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he course fees and when it will begin. I am looking forward to hearing from you ...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 696.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26993865031 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77420029665 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588957055215 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.795501145 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.2727272727 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108105289587 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390923426414 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454895689267 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066246053478 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580994376993 0.0580467560999 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.89 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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