Dear Joe,
I'm very glad to know that finally, you are visiting my country next month. I am sure you are going to experience the best of India on your upcoming visit.
As per our earlier discussion, I understand you were planning to stay with me at my Home for the time you will be in the Country. Although I too wish to spend most of my time with you, it's not going be possible as I will be traveling for work during those days. This trip is very crucial and I can't afford to miss it.
I am really sorry for the impromptu changes in the plan at this final stage. However, I have made enough arrangments to make you feel comfortable. For this purpose, I've already booked a Hotel for you in my city. You may contact (Hotel Anexx, +91 223584698) for any concerns related to your stay.
Apologises for this inconveniences
Your loving
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Joe, Im very glad to know that finally, you are...
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Line 6, column 186, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...wish to spend most of my time with you, its not going be possible as I will be trav...
^^^
Line 6, column 295, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e days. This trip is very crucial and I cant afford to miss it. I am really sorr...
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Line 8, column 166, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...you feel comfortable. For this purpose, Ive already booked a Hotel for you in my ci...
^^^
Line 10, column 35, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y. Apologises for this inconveniences Your loving XYZ
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, may, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 695.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42675159236 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43282087054 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675159235669 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.7456792491 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.5 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280227846214 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111204364192 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543799649365 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15705597032 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689057490899 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.