Dear Irina,
It's very exciting to hear that you'll be moving to London and congratulations on your new job!
As you'll probably be working in the city centre, perhaps you could think about living near me in Croydon. It's a large town in south London. There are people here from all over the world and it has a friendly, relaxed vibe.
In terms of public transport, you can get around London by bus, train and the Underground. You should just get an Oyster card, which I'll help you with. It means you can get on and off without having to buy a separate ticket each time. Public transport is pretty crowded in the mornings but no worse than in Moscow!
I'll introduce you to my friends and I'm sure you'll meet people at work too. You could try living in a shared house if you want to meet some locals.
Anyway, I can't wait to see you.
Lots of love,
Jane
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...rina, Its very exciting to hear that youll be moving to London and congratulations...
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Line 5, column 4, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
... congratulations on your new job! As youll probably be working in the city centre,...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... think about living near me in Croydon. Its a large town in south London. There are...
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Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...u should just get an Oyster card, which Ill help you with. It means you can get on ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...ornings but no worse than in Moscow! Ill introduce you to my friends and Im sure...
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Line 9, column 37, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... Ill introduce you to my friends and Im sure youll meet people at work too. You...
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Line 9, column 45, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...introduce you to my friends and Im sure youll meet people at work too. You could try ...
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Line 11, column 11, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... want to meet some locals. Anyway, I cant wait to see you. Lots of love, Jane...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39130434783 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1733805914 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.72049689441 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8287125916 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187240288501 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531366050307 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053135215258 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878668379179 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337152388429 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.39 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.