A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give contact details for when you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties
Dear Kiran,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and good spirits. I am writing to take care of my house while I am away for a couple of days to attend a seminar.
I have an important seminar at Delhi and being a team leader, my presence is unavoidable. The seminar is of 2 days and it is hoped to bring a big contract to my company. To be more specific about my business trip, I will fly from Vadodara airport on 4th of april and will return on 7th of april. Since you have been to my place many times before, I would not have to explain you much about my household. I cleaned the whole apartment, so you do not need to worry about it during your stay. However, I would insist you to buy tea, sugar and salt because the stock for these items is over and i could not get enough time to buy them. Moreover, the only thing that I have to tell you is to take care of my pet -toby, who is a vegetarian turtle. Although he is friendly and would not bother you much, please feed him with special veggies that i kept in the refrigerator.
I will give the keys with my neighbour so that you can collect from Mrs. Jane when you come in my absence. Admittedly, I will not have to worry as you are going to take care of my house and toby during my business trip.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours lovingly,
XYZ
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| 2019-03-29 | SamNiz | 73 | view |
| 2019-03-29 | vinshu koul | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... couple of days to attend a seminar. I have an important seminar at Delhi and ...
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Line 5, column 592, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e the stock for these items is over and i could not get enough time to buy them. ...
^
Line 5, column 682, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
... the only thing that I have to tell you is to take care of my pet -toby, who is a ...
^^
Line 5, column 840, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ease feed him with special veggies that i kept in the refrigerator. I will gi...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.10646387833 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22145014627 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570342205323 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.9 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.936542088 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53333333333 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227709632976 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803324783066 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049227205317 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127997833106 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264573065073 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.26 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.