A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter
give contact details for when you are away
give instructions about how to care for your pet
describe other household duties
Dear Martha,
I am exhilarated about my upcoming holiday to Nepal, and I am so glad that you are there to look after my puppy, stu. I was kind of worried about him when I was planning my trip, thanks for helping me out here.
I hope you don't face any issues while I am away, however, in case of any emergency or urgent needs, you can call Mike, my neighbor. I hope you remember him from your visit during the summer, last year. I already spoke to him about this, and he is happy to help. Here is his mobile number for when he is not at his place. (+91)9876543210.
Stu is a good boy, he won't trouble you at all unless he is left hungry. I have stacked all his food in the top-left shelf in my kitchen. Feed him on time, and use any of the green bowls, they are exclusively for him. And in the evening, maybe around 5 or 6 pm, when you go for your usual jogging, take him along for some fresh air.
Feel free to use all the stuff in my apartment. you can use the guest room for sleeping and keep your belongings. Make sure you keep the kitchen clean and the balcony closed at night. Because of the open area outside my balcony, it might get way too windy, especially at night, owing to which the rooms get colder, and the wind-chimes get louder.
I really appreciate your help. I would like to take you out for dinner some time. If you are free this friday evening, let's catch up, else we can plan it after I return next weekend. let me know of your availability. I am really excited to see you and tell you about my travel plan in detail.
Your friend,
Moumita
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...p, thanks for helping me out here. I hope you dont face any issues while I a...
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Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...or helping me out here. I hope you dont face any issues while I am away, howeve...
^^^^
Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... needs, you can call Mike, my neighbor. I hope you remember him from your visit d...
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Line 7, column 203, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...our visit during the summer, last year. I already spoke to him about this, and he...
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Line 13, column 49, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...e to use all the stuff in my apartment. you can use the guest room for sleeping and...
^^^
Line 16, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Let
...an plan it after I return next weekend. let me know of your availability. I am real...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, really, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 32.9175257732 185% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 305.0 206.0 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21639344262 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19046331516 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 127.690721649 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 290.88556701 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8435489314 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.3 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 7.41237113402 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289379461408 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997062845222 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847910609808 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153420298676 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464157242355 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.6 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.