A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter
give contact details for when you are away
give instructions about how to care for your pet
describe other household duties
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear James,
Thank you for agreeing to look after my house and my dog Oliver in my absence. I really appreciate all your help while I am away.
If you need to contact me, I will be staying at Hotel Kingston, Hammersmith. However, if its urgent, you can ring me on my mobile phone which will be with me at all times.
Oliver needs to be fed twice daily. You can give him a bowl full of pet cereal that's kept in the cupboard underneath the sink. Also, please ensure he is well hydrated during the day and is drinking plenty of water. You can give him a bowl of milk in the evening.
I would like you to ensure that the gas pipeline is switched off from the main switch in the nights. Also would like you to check my mailbox every morning and switch on the theft alarm before you go to bed in the night.
I look forward to seeing you on my return.
Thanks and Regards
Samantha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear James, Thank you for agreeing to look after my ...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...preciate all your help while I am away. If you need to contact me, I will be sta...
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Line 13, column 80, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... can give him a bowl full of pet cereal thats kept in the cupboard underneath the sin...
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Line 17, column 102, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...off from the main switch in the nights. Also would like you to check my mailbox ever...
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Line 17, column 221, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...larm before you go to bed in the night. I look forward to seeing you on my retur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, really, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 736.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30409356725 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10542559477 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5073090043 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.3333333333 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197605141937 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676248221501 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539882410301 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106398948683 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607986928585 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.