Dear Lindsay,
First of all, thank you so much for agreeing to look after my apartment during my absence. And, I hope you are doing well. I’m writing to give quick information about my address, contact information for any problems and some duties which require to be taken care of while I’m away.
I live on the 1st floor, House no 32, A block of Derwala Nagar. It is a three-bedroom apartment with a kitchen and a big living room. Each bedroom has a private bathroom and a closet. Also, I'll suggest you come by car and take a ring road from your street to reach my home because you could find traffic congestion in the town.
Moreover, please ensure to pick up newspapers and a milk bottle daily in the morning from the front door, or else it would be left at the entrance. Plus, try to maintain serene surroundings because there are old people living in my building.
Lastly, I just want to update you that if you face any problems while living at my residence during the time of absence from home. You can always give me a call on my mobile phone and I'll instantly revert to the solution. After coming back to my place, I'll take you out to drinks at the retro bar.
Looking forward to seeing you on my return.
Regards,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... a private bathroom and a closet. Also, Ill suggest you come by car and take a ring...
^^^
Line 9, column 185, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...s give me a call on my mobile phone and Ill instantly revert to the solution. After...
^^^
Line 9, column 254, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...olution. After coming back to my place, Ill take you out to drinks at the retro bar...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, look, moreover, so, well, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49344978166 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33956830047 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659388646288 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8957484808 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1538461538 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173685561673 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512700060436 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518257034269 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885872334424 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651479794259 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.