Dear Amber,
Hope you are doing fine and enjoying the season. I am so happy that you asked me to babysit Sophy for you on coming Saturday. However, my father birthday is this weekend and I cannot spare time. I am hoping would understand the situation. By the way, I will be available next week, if you are still looking for babysitting.
I am going to celebrate my father 60th birthday this weekend which already reserve a flight to my hometown two months ago. Due to I need to go to exam last year and missed his birthday. Even I celebrated with him through video calls, I felt he is disappointed. Therefore, I promised him that I will celebrate with him this year.
I am free next weekend and I would be glad to babysit Sophy for you then. My charge is fifteen dollars per hour until midnight and twenty dollars per hour after that. I am really sorry that I am not able to help this time.
Warm wishes,
Chris Wong
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, really, so, still, then, therefore, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41860465116 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4018876658 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.5954909886 44.8134815571 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.4615384615 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2307692308 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28671705064 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911286099453 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878498797533 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20063484872 0.12726935374 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102661457156 0.0580467560999 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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