Dear Amber,
Hope you are doing fine and enjoying the season. I am so happy that you asked me to babysit Sophy for you on coming Saturday. However, my father birthday is this weekend and I cannot spare time. I am hoping would understand the situation. By the way, I will be available next week, if you are still looking for babysitting.
I am going to celebrate my father 60th birthday this weekend which already reserve a flight to my hometown two months ago. Due to I need to go to exam last year and missed his birthday. Even I celebrated with him through video calls, I felt he is disappointed. Therefore, I promised him that I will celebrate with him this year.
I am free next weekend and I would be glad to babysit Sophy for you then. My charge is fifteen dollars per hour until midnight and twenty dollars per hour after that. I am really sorry that I am not able to help this time.
Warm wishes,
Chris Wong
- Leaders and directors in an organization are normally older people Some people think a younger leader would be better Do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people think that having a set retirement age e g 65 years for everybody regardless of occupation is unfair They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age Do you agree or disagree Which types of work 67
- The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 30
- Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend 61
- Prevention is better than cure Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures To what extent do you agree 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, really, so, still, then, therefore, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41860465116 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4018876658 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.5954909886 44.8134815571 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.4615384615 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2307692308 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28671705064 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911286099453 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878498797533 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20063484872 0.12726935374 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102661457156 0.0580467560999 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.