Hi Mike,
How's going these days? Thank you so much for offering me the data scientist job invitation of your company. I am writing this letter to discuss an alternate solution due to my work because I am so sorry to tell you I can not go to your company immediately.
Your company is famous with the data cleanning and modeling, almost everyone in our field would like to work in your place. However, I am so busy now since I was nominated as project team leader by my boss. The project is the biggest deal of my company so far because we are developing a credit card fraud detection for a major bank. The work due is three months later.
I do not want to let my boss and workmates down, they believe in me. Meanwhile, I think there is another way to handle the problem. After this work, I will be more experinced on machine learning approaches, thus I can work better in your company and I will not fail you. So can I delay this offer for three months?
Anyway, thank your for your invitation again, I'm waiting for your reply.
Sincrerely,
Tony
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: How's
Hi Mike, Hows going these days? Thank you so much for...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
..., thank your for your invitation again, Im waiting for your reply. Sincrerely, T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, however, so, thus, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40306122449 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41594966552 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632653061224 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1181009393 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9166666667 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307357442181 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978984464973 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919808243605 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204986661904 0.12726935374 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437748263695 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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