A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter: tell your friend you understand the problem, explain what happened to you in the past, suggest possible solutions to the problem. Write at least 150 words.
Dear Dave,
I received your letter recently and sorry that you are having
problem at your workplace. I completely understand your problem with your
supervisor as I was also at same situation few years back.
In my current company, I joined as Junior Analyst in 2012. At that time, my supervisor was
very helpful to me and taught be various aspects of my role. I got promoted to
Senior Analyst position and my supervisor changed. His behaviour toward me was
unethical. His pitch was always high and his behaviour was rude. that is why I
can relate to your problem with your manager.
For my problem, I approached a Human Resource department and initiated a supervisor change request. I declared
all the reason and HR department accepted them. I think you should also reach
out to your Human Resource department and they should be able to help you. Also, my advice will be to discuss with your supervisor's manager personally.
Don't worry too much and you will find a solution soon.
Take Care,
Tony
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92528735632 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61127063151 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614942528736 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6320353357 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.2142857143 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4285714286 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.21428571429 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.29896907216 279% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264711423944 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882033211436 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108654867346 0.0603063233224 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109803789265 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115887616299 0.0580467560999 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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