Dear Sameer,
I received your letter this morning and got to know that you are facing some issues at work and would therefore, suggest some possible solutions.
As you know, I had joined a new company last year, and I was finding it hard adjusting with the new work culture and my colleagues, so I can understand your situation and the stress you must be experiencing at the moment.
Although, it was a reputed company with a good client base, I was finding it difficult to work in a multicultural environment, since I was experiencing this type of environment for the first time. Also, my colleagues were not so friendly, may be because I was shy and didn't interacted much with them.
I'd like to suggest that you try to be friendly and polite with all your co-workers because it will help you to settle in the new workplace quickly. Also, I would advice that you be patient and take your time till you get comfortable with the culture of your new company.
Anyway, I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Warm wishes,
Sam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... friendly, may be because I was shy and didnt interacted much with them. Id like t...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...and didnt interacted much with them. Id like to suggest that you try to be frie...
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Message: Did you mean 'advise' (a verb)?
Suggestion: advise
...he new workplace quickly. Also, I would advice that you be patient and take your time ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, first, if, look, may, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65945945946 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65313464562 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.8641609442 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.75 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 4.34317383033 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280675749905 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120039038899 0.0766984524023 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962974411663 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156952107826 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944816039115 0.0580467560999 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.