Dear Mahfuz,
I am writing to thank you for inviting me over to your house next summer holiday. Unfortunately, I won't be able to come to your country because I have already planned the summer vacation.
Let me explain my situation in more detail. I was planning for a trip to India for a long time now. But I was unable to manage time due to my hectic project works. This year summer vacation, I'll go to India, and I'll visit seven states of India for a 21-day long trip. I have purchased all the tickets for me and another colleague of mine who will accompany me on this trip. I am quite excited about visiting India during my summer vacation.
Can you let me know of another time you will be free? I'd love to visit your place and stay for a few days. I'm interested in learning how you are holding up in the new country. It's been 3 years already you left this country for Myanmar. However, I'll have another vacation at the end of June for 10 days. I would love to spend those 10 days at your place.
Please let me know.
Your friend,
Abed Joy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
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Message: The proper name in singular (Ill) must be used with a third-person verb: 'goes'.
Suggestion: goes
...t works. This year summer vacation, Ill go to India, and Ill visit seven states of...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...r summer vacation, Ill go to India, and Ill visit seven states of India for a 21-da...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
... know of another time you will be free? Id love to visit your place and stay for a...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...sit your place and stay for a few days. Im interested in learning how you are hold...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...left this country for Myanmar. However, Ill have another vacation at the end of Jun...
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Line 7, column 250, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Ill) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... this country for Myanmar. However, Ill have another vacation at the end of June for...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Please let me know. Your friend, Abed Joy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28358208955 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23226241074 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592039800995 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8728108977 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 53.8125 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5625 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 4.34317383033 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232188660269 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808190332428 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075039331901 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17414857081 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941585363212 0.0580467560999 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.0 8.37731958763 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.66 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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