A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him or her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
Thank him/her for the invitation.
Explain why cannot come.
Ask him/her about other times to visit.
Dear Hilton,
I am writing to thank you for your invitation. It’s very kind of you but unfortunately I would not be able to visit you during my summer break due to my hectic work schedule.
Let me explain my scenario in detail. I have recently started working at the Bose store as a store manager and have been working round the clock, this has been my dream job and I am really quiet enjoying the work. I have my annual meeting at the corporate office, scheduled for exactly the same time.
Can I suggest that we reschedule this for a different date in the same calendar year. Winter is the time of the year that I’m generally vacating in, it would be great if we can plan something around this time of the year. I would be more than obliged to visit you and your family during my vacation and see your new house. Once again it was really nice to hear from you and I apologise for my strict regime.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours truly,
Abhishek Berry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It&apos
...iting to thank you for your invitation. it's very kind of you but unfortunately I ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... and have been working round the clock. it is my dream job and I am really enjoyin...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Can
...uled for exactly the same time. can I suggest that we reschedule this for a...
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Line 23, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or your consideration. Yours truly, Abhishek Berry
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion. Yours truly, Abhishek Berry
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53333333333 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40808822282 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616666666667 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0281632722 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170463438054 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843753870693 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980062322477 0.0603063233224 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149293635961 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103097343562 0.0580467560999 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.