A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
*Thank him/her for the invitation
*Explain why you cannot come
*Ask him/her about other times to visit
Dear Rancy,
I hope you are doing great ! Thanks much for the invitation.
I appreciate your time and efforts to plan for my stay in Canada. I understand how you have been planning for our get together from long time.
However, my relatives have planned for a vacation in my next holidays. They are coming all the way from India.
As they were very desperate to visit U.S.A I coludn't say no to them. Also, I had been postponing their plan from long time so I have to spend my holidays with them this time. Hope you understand my situation rancy.
I think we can catch up in december for christmas. As its festive season I would not be having much work also I can opt for work from home. Hope this works for you as you will be having holidays in december. Hope you have no other plans for this christmas. In case, if you have other plans suggest other alternative months.
With love
Rukhsar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ey are coming all the way from India. As they were very desperate to visit U.S.A...
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Line 13, column 42, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...s they were very desperate to visit U.S.A I coludnt say no to them. Also, I had b...
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Line 13, column 42, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'A' or 'I'?
Suggestion: A; I
...s they were very desperate to visit U.S.A I coludnt say no to them. Also, I had bee...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57228915663 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31193564661 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602409638554 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.2757646928 44.8134815571 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.2142857143 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.8571428571 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166211706881 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689763303023 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512644627773 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106417053694 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046473039242 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.